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Topic Started: Mar 5 2013, 11:20 PM (694,788 Views)
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I'm taking a Photoshop college course (I think I told some of you about this?) and for my 2nd day, I have an assignment to do.

"Make a graphics art design for a snack/food. It can be your own creation or simply a snack from Doritos."

Check out my two designs I whipped up this past hour and tell me what you think! They're due tomorrow at 2PM, so I'd like to hear what you think.

Doritos Jacked


Starbucks Frappuccino
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I like the Doritos more. The design suits the snack.
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Aug 5 2015, 12:11 AM
I'm taking a Photoshop college course (I think I told some of you about this?) and for my 2nd day, I have an assignment to do.

"Make a graphics art design for a snack/food. It can be your own creation or simply a snack from Doritos."

Check out my two designs I whipped up this past hour and tell me what you think! They're due tomorrow at 2PM, so I'd like to hear what you think.

Doritos Jacked


Starbucks Frappuccino
The Dorito one is quite fitting to the house style that the packaging currently holds, though there is some repetition going on with the way it's currently laid out on the page and as such causes the design to stutter quite a bit. If you intended to keep the packaging on there, perhaps it would be better to remove the slogan centred in the top middle there and then enlarge said packaging, allowing it to take up more of the dead space that removing the slogan would bring. I say this because the packaging currently holds the same words as the slogan, and repeating it is usually a big no-no in graphic design. There's also some slight noticeable artefact - visual anomalies, basically the white line - around the flames, but it's only emphasised around the packaging, as it is pure white against an iridescent black.

The Starbucks one, though? I genuinely love this one. The colours blend so well together and the design is so simple and not cluttered in the slightest. My only issue that irks me is that the coffee beans and the cup together seem too far down, and there's quite a bit of dead space between it and the logo and the name up at the top. Perhaps nudging it up a little will equalise the dead space on either side and lead to a more rounded look?

Gotta say though, these are some mighty fine attempts. The second one is superbly minimalistic.
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I don't know who to choice but they are both Amazing :o

#IuseChoiceInsteadofChooseBecauseI'Don'tLoveGrammarNazi
Edited by Zoo Tycooner FR, Aug 5 2015, 12:41 AM.
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I don't drink coffee but I like the Starbucks one better.
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Ran into one of the school idiots at the library today.

Now I remember why I wanted it to be summer break so badly a few months ago.
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Aug 5 2015, 12:38 AM
I don't know who to choice but they are both Amazing :o

#IuseChoiceInsteadofChooseBecauseI'Don'tLoveGrammarNazi
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I got the best score I ever had in Agar.io. A mass of 1994 and 7th place. Then some random guy came and ate me when I was trying to eat him.
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Meeting a Paleontologist tomorrow in his office to talk about schools, could an internship come out of this?! (I seriously can't contain my excitement, he's an expert on Permian wildlife specifically diictodons and cynodonts!)
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20 kids tackling you and squirting guns at you really wear you out. What do you know.
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Trying to pace myself from finishing The Dinosaur Lords tonight... my god it's a good book.

If anything, a setting that's basically a fantasy version of Spain is perfect omg
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Took a relaxing bath (for the first time in months), wrapped a warm towel around my head, then shampooed my hair with a comb. I'm so relaxed I can barely type...
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Once again part of the ZT2 Community.

I'm currently uncertain that I'll ever come back so I'll just say this.
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Aug 5 2015, 11:03 PM
Took a relaxing bath (for the first time in months), wrapped a warm towel around my head, then shampooed my hair with a comb. I'm so relaxed I can barely type...
Nope, cancel that. My mom just woke me up for me to refeed my gecko which was feed sufficiently today.
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Is it considered ok if you fall asleep in the middle of walking to the kitchen?

*gets off chair*

*walks to kitchen*

*falls down*

*sleeps*
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